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Class 1
Jun 9, 2005 18:05:57 GMT -5
Post by energizer184 on Jun 9, 2005 18:05:57 GMT -5
Okay, newbie, one important thing is the story set-up.
1. He saw a big bear coming at him. "oh no" bob said.
2. A huge bear charged at Bob. "O CRAP!" Bob screamed.
Which is better? Set up the story in a GOOD way.
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